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Rafa Joseph's avatar

"When I woke up, I sat and felt my feelings. I was a bit clumsy with them." made me laugh out loud. This fellow has some true, plainspoken grit. And folksy airs, to boot.

This piece was sad, and reading it made me incredibly hungry. It's too early for whiskey anyway, so maybe the folks at the tavern'll fix me right up. Nice job, sir!

Sorin Cloud's avatar

Thank you so much! Your comment is the best. I love how your comment fits the story so perfectly. Writing the story made me a little hungry too! Haha I looked up the foods in the wild west, and I think sourdough pancakes would be absolutely amazing. Thanks for reading!

Rafa Joseph's avatar

I could never make it in the wild west. They bathed in a huge metal pan full of river water, and everyone in town had to share the same five women. Just imagine what they would do to you if you came down with appendicitis. *Eeek!*

Sorin Cloud's avatar

Taking a cold shower is hard enough! lol